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It's been cool to see Peppekz's work evolve. I liked this one a lot...he was able to pack a lot of character into a very simple VN assset-wise, particularly with the physical comedy. The ending was a little short and abrupt for me, but i had an enjoyful time following along with crotchety old europeans.
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a very important novel for a reason
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From the music, to the custom art (hehe bear tiddies), to the premise, "On a String" is a very well done short story. With so simple and fanfiction-tropey of a premise, there's a good deal of depth and realness here.
I would 100% read something else, either of these characters or a new property, from Bazcus
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It's been a long time since a became addicted to a visual novel, can't wait for updates. Great story.
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#GuildShaming #WyvernLifesMatter
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Nice characterizations, good art. Nice and simple meet cute into a budding romance. You did what you set out to do and did it fairly well, I'd say.
Only thing that confuses me is why partying is a crime unless she's underage, which I guess she could be but she felt at least slightly older than that, and how that turns into community service so far away instead of locally.
I mean, I know its for the premise of the work, it just is odd to me.
Also bag toss? You mean cornhole????
Good job!
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I'm on board with the minimalist sprites and your adept way at building out the cast through repetition of the forms and color shifting, but I think it would have stood to have backgrounds, even if they were filtered real life locations.
I think that was a well crafted story. The characters and resolution felt real. It evoked my own band experience when I was in high school (although I was a bit confused if they were university students but all living locally nearby with their parents? But that's mostly trivial).
I wonder if we had just a bit more of what was being implied with the camping trip (like one line more) if it would make the resolution ring truer, or something to point to Mitch being a physical minded person. I also don't know if it follows that the mother would be concerned with trips home after the incident, but I suppose it tracks that concern doesn't have to take a rational form.
Well executed overall. It'd be a 4.5 if itch had half-stars, but we don't live in ideal ratings world and I think it's a distinct enough issue to not have some form of backgrounds to round down. My writing wants are minimal at best, because it was a realistically well crafted story. I was definitely engrossed from start to finish. The ending left me wanting but in a good way, to keep that unresolved tension stringing us along. It's one that makes sense, but that string keeps vibrating, a final note that only dissipates when we let go of the work.
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Very expressive stylized artwork and interesting premise.
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quick advice: just try all the routes and dont skip anything, , it just weird